Tuesday, 31 January 2012

The word-forge and the world-forge: similarities between poetry and zen koans

I've become interested in Zen koans lately. Like poetry, they are a useful form for approaching an expression of things that are beyond words.

Koans are small and hard. They are crystalline in their difficulty. I find this interesting as an argument that is sometimes used against poetry (see the current disagreement between Geoffrey Hill and Carol Ann Duffy). My own feeling is that, like a koan, a poem should be a place where simplicity and complexity meet.

I admire koans for the tension that exists between this simplicity of language and the difficulty of the meaning. Koans point beyond language and existing concepts but can never quite connect with what they point to. A Zen buddhist might argue that there is no defined meaning to connect with, the koan points to a place which is beyond meaning. They are, I think, partly intended to stretch our minds so that we become comfortable with uncertainty: something we should be more used to by now.

Both artforms do their work at the frontier between language and reality. Poetry is a word-forge, a place where meaning is created; a koan's purpose is to dismantle concepts that obstruct our way of seeing. They have an opposite but equivalent way of reaching the fundamental. This is the struggle of language: it is most often used to superimpose meaning on the world, but the more accurate usage is always to allude.

If you're going to write about the infinite, it's best to be concise about it. You should try to knit everything together in a single knot. Don't worry, something will always be left untied. If you're writing in prose*, clean, simple language and bright, strong nouns are the way forward. Remember that the target is infinitely small and infinitely large. If you imitate the formless sprawl of your subject, you'll miss the mark many times and be far wide of it. A single near miss is better.

Here are a couple of koans I have thought about lately:

No Water, No Moon

When the nun Chiyono studied Zen under Bukko of Engaku she was unable to attain the fruits of meditation for a long time.
At last one moonlit night she was carrying water in an old pail bound with bamboo. The bamboo broke and the bottom fell out of the pail, and at that moment Chiyono was set free!
In commemoration, she wrote a poem:
In this way and that I tried to save the old pail
Since the bamboo strip was weakening and about to break
Until at last the bottom fell out.
No more water in the pail!
No more moon in the water!

The Moon Cannot Be Stolen

Ryokan, a Zen master, lived the simplest kind of life in a little hut at the foot of a mountain. One evening a thief visited the hut only to discover there was nothing to steal.
Ryokan returned and caught him. "You have come a long way to visit me," he told the prowler, "and you should not return empty-handed. Please take my clothes as a gift."
The thief was bewildered. He took the clothes and slunk away.
Ryoken sat naked, watching the moon. "Poor fellow," he mused, "I wish I could have given him this beautiful moon."
 

Joshu Washes the Bowl

A monk told Joshu: `I have just entered the monastery. Please teach me.' Joshu asked: `Have you eaten your rice porridge?'
The monk replied: `I have eaten.'
Joshu said: `Then you had better wash your bowl.'
At that moment the monk was enlightened.
Mumon's Comment: Joshu is the man who opens his mouth and shows his heart. I doubt if this monk really saw Joshu's heart. I hope he did not mistake the bell for a pitcher.

It is too clear and so it is hard to see.
A dunce once searched for fire with a lighted lantern.
Had he known what fire was,
He could have cooked his rice much sooner.
from http://www.ibiblio.org/zen/cgi-bin/koan-index.pl

*Mark Z. Danielewski's House of Leaves makes an admirable attempt of mimicking a limitless labyrinth underneath a suburban house. At one point, he shifts to a Zen-like tactic of negation to describe all the architectural styles that the labyrinth does not resemble.

Monday, 30 January 2012

Cat simulator

Didn't get much writing done tonight and Terry Cavanagh's Chat Chat is to blame, (aside from a few wedding preparations). The purpose of the game is to be a cat. That means exploring, sleeping, screeching, napping, catching mice and depositing them in a bloody mess on your owner's doorstep. As seasoned cat watchers we found this all too familiar.

Sunday, 29 January 2012

National Not Novel Writing Month

I've done a bit more on the novel today. In the initial writing phase I was hoping to get as much done in as short a time as possible and signed up to National Novel Writing Month in October. Call it cheating but I'd decided, in order to capitalise on my enthusiasm, to get a head start before November began, especially as I had a few weekends away in November. I wrote intensively and ended up feeling knackered. When November rolled around I switched into poetry mode and didn't write a single word of prose during NaNoWriMo, picking it back up in December just to be awkward.

Now my feeling is that a little and often is the way to go. It gives things the time they need to develop naturally. Even so, I can see a few distractions on the horizon: other projects, various computer games, reading and a busy social calendar. But that's fine; distractions are the fun part of life.

Saturday, 28 January 2012

Words and wisdom

After a run I spent the morning reading Seneca: On the Shortness of Life, Consolation to Helvia and On Tranquility of Mind. I played some guitar in the afternoon and came up with the verse and chorus of a song that could work for Distant Signal. I'll pick it up tomorrow and see if there's anything there.

Something led me from Seneca to Edward Conze's translation of 'The Diamond Sutra', where I found this:
"Wisdom will use terms always in such a way that the original meaning is revealed. And men were wise long before they became clever. This linguistic correlate of Jung's collective unconscious is surely worthy of greater attention than it usually receives."
He goes on to quote I.A. Richards, Meaning of Meaning:
" No one who has used a dictionary - for other than orthographic reasons - can have escaped the shock of discovering how very far ahead of us our words are. How subtly they already record distinctions towards which our minds are still groping. If we could read this reflection of our minds aright, we might learn nearly as much about ourselves as we shall ever wish to know."
This is one of the reasons why poetry can have such an effect on us: it links words by their submerged part.

Friday, 27 January 2012

A rethink

I'm going to refocus this blog to concentrate more explicitly on the projects I'm currently involved in. The blog should benefit from a narrative arc as things progress.
  • I'm 30,000 words into the first draft of a novel.
  • I'm roughly halfway through writing a book of poetry.
  • I'm getting ready to get back in the studio with Distant Signal.
  • I'm sitting on a bunch of recordings that will eventually make up the next Uffmoor Woods Music Club album.
  • I've got a stack of books to read.
I'll still post about places, art and ideas that interest me whilst trying to be a bit more open about what I'm doing.

Double rainbow on an industrial estate

Saturday, 14 January 2012

Friday, 6 January 2012

New Year's Day Walk - Kingsclere to Watership Down


On New Year's Day, four of us went on a character building circular walk from Kingsclere to Watership Down and back again. It was around five miles in total through sheer walls of gnashing rain. All in all, a great day!



The TV mast!

















New Year's Day Walk Pt. II














New Year's Day Walk Pt. III




















And after all that, the pub was closed.